PROMPT ENGINEERING

Does this draft still read like a chatbot?

Still a default draft0 / 10

Start with the two-point items. Facts you can trace and a detail only you know do more than any rewording.

Every number, name and quote traced to a page I opened
At least one detail only I could know
Opens with the point, not a greeting
Closes on a next step, not a recap
No sentence ends in commentary about importance
No "not just X, it's Y" constructions
Bullets only where items are truly separate
Read aloud once and every stumble fixed